Wednesday, August 22, 2007

Haiku: Daybreak


Technicolor dreams
Shifting shape, blurring, then gone.
Black to gray to dawn.

Dewy Grass


Dog’s dewy paws crunch
on neighbors’ sleeping grasses.
No sprinklers needed.

[Read others' morning meanderings in response to the prompt "Daybreak" at One Deep Breath.]

10 comments:

Jeni said...

Ah - a poet amongst our midst, huh? Good job on that too!

Crafty Green Poet said...

lovely image of the dogs dewy paws!

Christine said...

Technicolor dreams made me think. We do dream a lot early in the morning..

Rae Trigg said...

I love the dew on the grass in the photo and the second haiku fits it perfectly. I also like the colors in the first haiku.

OneBlueSoul said...

Great images. I love the photo.

tumblewords said...

Lovely day breaks and the photo is superb as well!

Ron said...

First one: perfect image of the progression of colors. Love the 'technicolor dreams', 'though I understand not everyone dreams in color.
Second one: :)

Clare said...

Such a pretty photo and really nice haiku(s)! The first haiku created a really lovely image in my mind, and the dog one gave me a big grin.
:)

allrileyedup said...

pretty as always!

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