With teeth firmly set,
No falling stars crossing paths,
We chase wish faeries.
Wisps of white take wing
Carried over hands outreached.
A faery flies on.
No falling stars crossing paths,
We chase wish faeries.
Wisps of white take wing
Carried over hands outreached.
A faery flies on.
[Lots of great poetry at One Deep Breath.]
13 comments:
Fantastic!!
this is my favorite of your poems!
Charming! :-)
Delightful phrase, "wish faeries." They also look a bit like ballerinas on the coming down end of a leap. :-)
I love your writing! So much that I'm tagging you for a writing meme! Head over to my blog to check it out...
I've never heard them called faeries - nifty haiku and photo!
I love the picture and the thought of calling these wish faeries.
I LOVE this!! Fantastic imagery! And "wish faeries" is such a pretty and magical name. I love the lines "with teeth firmly set/ no falling stars crossing paths," -- really clever.
:)
wish faeries - lovely way to see them!
Nice. Good to see haiku on something that could so easily get lost on the way. I'm far from the first to say it - but 'wish faeries' is a great phrase!
Oh, I like both of these so much, especially the second...
gorgeous!
(is that your photo?)
Lovely photo.
Wish faeries. I've never heard them called that. What a wonderful idea.
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