It's Haiku Friday again. Lots of better ones to check out at the home of Haiku Friday at A Mommy Story.
More often than not
I’m creating memories
I’d rather not make.
Innocents as shields
deflect anger and sorrow
but fail to end it.
I take the kids’ cue,
laughing just to hear laughter.
There’s something to it.
I’m creating memories
I’d rather not make.
Innocents as shields
deflect anger and sorrow
but fail to end it.
I take the kids’ cue,
laughing just to hear laughter.
There’s something to it.
16 comments:
Another great haiku...
Lovely, lovely haiku. You're getting really good at it! :D
Such deep meaning, your haiku. "Laughing just to hear laughter." :( I hope your days get better, Patois. *hugs*
TGIHF, indeed. Here's hoping your weekend injects some much-needed giddiness. By Friday, good Lord, we're at our wits end, too.
Great Haiku, sometimes instead of 'beating' the kids I decide to join them in a wrestling/tickling match and we all feel better for it.
Thanks for sharing!
I love the second one. And again someone does something truly poetic. I just try to cram my life into 5-7-5. Wouldn't it be nice if it all fit that way?
Oh my doG, I am so printing this and putting on the fridge!
I need to get on the ball with these. I miss writing poetry!
Hey--We are going to be in the Bay Area next week. Any suggestions of what to do? Where to go? What to see? What NOT to see? LOL
Those are really beautiful, hearfelt.
Awesome haiku! I loved all of them.
Great haiku. Very applicable to my life here lately.
I've certainly felt this on many occasions! GREAT JOB!!
Great haikus as always. I especially enjoyed the third one.
Wow, seriously, you are so good at these Patois. This was so beautiful. I hope you get yourself a good fun weekend.
Oh wow! this made me cry... (((hugs)))
So beautiful. G was right when she told me it was beautiful
Great work.
Laughing always lifts my mood, if even just for a bit...
this first haiku speaks of great sadness or regret. nicely done.
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