Strawberry shampoo
lingers on my daughter's hair
"Delightful," I say.
Advent calendar
doles out daily chocolate.
Requirements met.
[Many yummy poems at One Breath Poetry.]
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I love the smell of scented shampoo on my daughter's hair, too. Right now she is using watermelon. Great 'ku, Patty, as usual!
I love the way my kids hair smells after a bath. It is certainly yummy!
These are great! I especially like the first one - so fresh!
"Delightful!" And how! I love the smell of strawberry shampoo. Wish they'd make a strawberry-chocolate scent. Mmmmmmm!
Strawberries and chocolate together in their own poems. Wonderful poems. The Advent calendar is the treat that follows getting dressed for school, so I can appreciate this imagery very much!
God bless.
Oh Chocolate Advent Calendars! How you mock me! Who can eat one piece of chocolate a day???
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a clean-washed child is a marvelous take on the prompt...
patois, your wish for the people of Baghdad was very nice!
maryt for Deb
Forget to say something about the haiku...clever! :)
Ahh, I was hoping to find something like this here. Thank you. Loving the chocolate too -- soothes the soul. SusieJ
Hey, my Advent calendar doesn't dole out chocolates. I feel cheated. ;)
Boy, a double-header! Love to smell the kids hair especially when they get out of the tub, all ready for bed - so sweet, so pleasant - so promising that there will soon be peace and quiet too. Now a chocolate rendering advent calendar has to rock! And by the way, back to yesterday's post - mark my words, come the day she is 16 -18 or so, all decked out for Prom or some other big event and you'll see, she's got the makings there for being a beauty queen. Trust me!
A haiku that invokes other senses? Brilliant! Why don't they make chocolate shampoo?
She's sooo cute.
Strawberry shampoos do smell yummy. I love them too.
I love the advent calendar one! My little guy is addicted to his daily chocolate!
Strawberry shampoos, me likes! Thank you.
UL
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