Tuesday, June 3, 2008

Haiku: Freedom

For this week's One Single Impression offering.


Barren months give way
to growth hidden deep below:
Flowering children.

10 comments:

SandyCarlson said...

That is just gorgeous. Perfecto!

True of kids--and my cucumbers, which my daughter and I had to unearth because we had overdone it with the soil! Beautiful images come together in your work. God bless.
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Raven said...

What a wonderful image for the journey of giving birth... and the free-ing of life. Well done as always. You always surprise me in such delighful ways.

me ann my camera said...

How wonderful this is. It fits in well too, to when the adult kids now come home to visit... with their kids.

Thanks for droping by my post and for your lovely comments.

zoya gautam said...

growth hidden deep_is a law of life-and_'Flowering children' highlights with joy the wonder and beauty of this law..

Genny said...

I loved this. Thank you!

one more believer said...

as a crazy gardener cleaning winters blanket and preparing for the flowers to bloom that is wonderful.. as a mother what a beautiful blessing... thank you

gautami tripathy said...

Reinforces life force. Great going!

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gardenpath said...

Oh, this one is nice!

Lisa at Greenbow said...

Very good.

jenica said...

ha. so are you pregnant? hehe

it's actually a very beautiful poem. you are a gifted writer.

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