Wednesday, July 2, 2008

Haiku: Doorway

One Single Impression's prompt this week is doorway. Do read how others approached the prompt!

Enchanted threshold
beckons with false promises:
I choose another

6 comments:

Pam said...

I like this haiku for its unexpected surprise. How difficult it is to determine which threshold to cross.

SandyCarlson said...

I like this. AND I wish I had your wisdom!

Raven said...

Ah... to have such wisdom... great haiku.

Edward S Gault said...

Yes,good insight-"enchanted" might not be all it's cracked up to be.
Thank You for the fine poem.

Lisa at Greenbow said...

Oh so true. Good haiku.

zoya gautam said...

for sharing ur poem thank u..

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