Tuesday, August 12, 2008

Haiku: Stairways


Ah, Paris in the summertime! Thanks to One Single Impression for an inspiring prompt.


Yes, The Tower

Eschewing their lure
to reach the faraway top:
Elevator up.


Beckoning again,
we give in to its promise
of satisfaction.


Another View of Yes, The Tower

15 comments:

SandyCarlson said...

Wow! Flying past the stairs is a delightful option. I hope that promise was fulfilled!

Jim said...

Hi Pat, wasn't that a nice thing to do, up, up and up. And it is up the easy way compared to climbing the stair (I've done both).
Thank you for posting your haiku about it, I've looked at haiku and had some thoughts but never pen to paper.
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BTW, I have a YouTube video of it at night. It is very short. Check Jim1Jim1 either by Google or on YouTube search (if you'd like to do that).
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tumblewords said...

Ah, this brought back a memory or two. Nice post - nice haiku!

Just Jen said...

Just stopping by to give you an update to my new blog url, I'm hoping this will ditch the watchful eyes of my 'troll'. http://humbleopinion2.blogspot.com/
(I'd be scared to bits to take that last photo!)

cjh said...

I have that same picture from underneath...

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MamaGeek said...

This is more than you want to know.

I APOLOGIZE.

A guy, whom I DISLIKED very much, proposed to me on the Eiffel Tower. Since then I look at it and gag.

But otherwise, I'd love it. :)

Bubba's Sis said...

Awesome!

D... said...

It is a dream of mine to see that in person. It will happen too!

qualcosa di bello said...

cool perspective~~ in both words & photos!

Annie said...

Ha. Wonderful but truly, I cried for the elevator. No stairs on this trip for me. Annie

gardenpath said...

Good poems, like Annie, I would take the elevator!

zoya gautam said...

..thank u for a very nice post..

Pam said...

There is such satisfaction to achieve something worked hard for. I too enjoy this aspect of life. Going back down has always been the hard part for me. . . seeing the ground so far away!

Michele said...

Fantastic! Great shots, too.

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