Tuesday, June 30, 2009

Blue Rain: Haiku

One Single Impression offers up blue rain for a prompt this week. Poets are drenched in the stuff. Make sure you read their offerings. As for me:


Incessant blue rain
makes for heartache-clogged gutters.
Puddles of sadness.

8 comments:

Geraldine said...

Excellent Patois! Love your interpretation of this great prompt.

D... said...

Excellent job! That's probably true. I'm in a drought right now, though.

Coal Miner's Granddaughter said...

Blue rain will transform
My home into a big Smurf.
Clear rain is better.

:)

Beck said...

It's raining it's pour
ing, The Baby puddle jump
ed - why am I wet?

There's tonight's haiku for you, based on tonight's events.

gabrielle said...

Your Blue Rain haiku is a perfect finale for this week's prompt. Puddle jumping and splashing through a posey of blue rain poems this week
has put me in touch with a shared sense of longing.

Jocelyn said...

Man, you're really harshing on my mellow.


Hey, I'm on my way to a haiku with that, right there, ja?

Anne said...

What a lovely interpretation. We have had so much rain lately, it is starting to make me blue.

SandyCarlson said...

Quite a heart-felt metaphor,to be sure. Thanks for joining us this week.

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